Review - The Day You Begin

The Day You Begin
by Jacqueline Woodson
illustrated by Rafael López
Date: 2018
Publisher: Nancy Paulsen Books
Reading level: C
Book type: picture book
Pages: 32
Format: e-book
Source: library

National Book Award winner Jacqueline Woodson and two-time Pura Belpré Illustrator Award winner Rafael López have teamed up to create a poignant, yet heartening book about finding courage to connect, even when you feel scared and alone.

There will be times when you walk into a room
and no one there is quite like you.

There are many reasons to feel different. Maybe it's how you look or talk, or where you're from; maybe it's what you eat, or something just as random. It's not easy to take those first steps into a place where nobody really knows you yet, but somehow you do it.

Jacqueline Woodson's lyrical text and Rafael López's dazzling art reminds us that we all feel like outsiders sometimes-and how brave it is that we go forth anyway. And that sometimes, when we reach out and begin to share our stories, others will be happy to meet us halfway.

(synopsis from Goodreads)

This sweet picture book pairs Jacqueline Woodson's lyrical text with Rafael López's stunning artwork to create a relatable story with a strong message.

Many kids will be able to find something to relate to here, whether it's being teased about an accent or an unusual name, being left out on the playground, having kids ask too many questions about your lunch, or even feeling like your summer was boring because you just stayed home (while all your friends went on exciting vacations). The book celebrates the uniqueness in all of us, while showing that we sometimes have more in common than we think. It also shows how differences can be strengths.

López's artwork--in a painterly sort of collage style--is beautiful and colourful, and the children portrayed come from a diverse array of backgrounds. It's a lovely book to look at.

Overall, I really enjoyed this one. Jacqueline Woodson has a way of writing that makes me feel like I can totally relate. I haven't read any of her other picture books yet (only Brown Girl Dreaming, her childhood memoir in verse), but after reading this I'm going to see if I can find some of them.

Quotable moment:

Premise: 4/5
Meter: n/a
Writing: 4/5
Illustrations: 5/5
Originality: 4/5

Enjoyment: 4/5

Overall: 4.17 out of 5

Review - Brown Girl Dreaming

Brown Girl Dreaming
by Jacqueline Woodson
Date: 2014
Publisher: Penguin Books
Reading level: MG
Book type: verse memoir
Pages: 336
Format: e-book
Source: library

Jacqueline Woodson, one of today's finest writers, tells the moving story of her childhood in mesmerizing verse.

Raised in South Carolina and New York, Woodson always felt halfway home in each place. In vivid poems, she shares what it was like to grow up as an African American in the 1960s and 1970s, living with the remnants of Jim Crow and her growing awareness of the Civil Rights movement. Touching and powerful, each poem is both accessible and emotionally charged, each line a glimpse into a child’s soul as she searches for her place in the world. Woodson’s eloquent poetry also reflects the joy of finding her voice through writing stories, despite the fact that she struggled with reading as a child. Her love of stories inspired her and stayed with her, creating the first sparks of the gifted writer she was to become.

(synopsis from Goodreads)

When I first started this book -- in fact, for about the first half of it -- I was pretty bored.  Not much seemed to be happening, though the writing did invoke a sense of place and time.  That was probably what kept me going.  In the latter part of the book, as Jacqueline grows older and begins to understand more about the world around her (and her place in it), the story becomes much more interesting.  I suspect that's because those parts were based on her own memory, rather than other people's recollections.

The years covered in the book were a time of great change.  Segregation was over, but prejudice remained.  The Civil Rights movement was in full swing.  Feminism was coming to the forefront.  The Vietnam War was going on.  On top of all that, Jacqueline's family went through many changes.  They moved around quite a bit, from city to country to city again.  Family members died, new ones were born, some walked into their life, others walked out, new friends came into the picture, new teachers became encouraging voices...

As an adult, I found the book weirdly nostalgic in places, though I'm neither black nor a child of the 1960s.  Some parts of childhood remained constant for a long time, at least until recently: hopscotch and jump-rope with friends, songs on the radio, old-fashioned board games, treats that cost less than a dollar...  And then there were the parts of Jacqueline's childhood that were foreign to me, but that I could picture so well from her descriptions: hair ribbons and hot irons, Maria's mother's cooking, the red dirt roads around her grandparents' home, the lingering unease after the end of segregation in the South.  Jacqueline's family members came alive on the pages, and when I looked over the family photos at the back of the book, I wasn't really surprised by many of them; they looked pretty much as I'd pictured them in my mind.

While I did end up enjoying the story, I wasn't all that crazy about the writing.  It wasn't bad, but I didn't like all the comma splices.  Yes, it is a verse novel, but I would've rather seen more line breaks than the comma splices (the author used both in her verse... which seemed a little weird).  I'm also not sold on the use of italics to set off dialogue.  Alice Hoffman used the same technique in Incantation, and I thought it was kind of pretentious.  What's wrong with good old quotation marks?

In all, though, I did enjoy this book, though I think the intended audience might find it a little bit boring and intimidating -- and might give up on it before they get to the best parts.  And I have to say, I really like that cover.  The combination of colours plus the silhouette make it really beautiful.  I would recommend this one, but maybe to teenagers or adults; I can't see it being that appealing to younger readers, even though the main character is a child.

Quotable moment:

The walk home from the candy lady's house
is a quiet one
except for the sound of melting ice cream
being slurped up
fast, before it slides past our wrists,
on down our arms and onto
the hot, dry road.

Recommended to: older fans of American historical fiction

Plot: 4/5
Characters: 5/5
Pace: 3/5
Writing & Editing: 3/5
Originality: 3/5

Enjoyment: 4/5

Overall Rating: 3.71 out of 5 ladybugs